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本帖最后由 一骑绝尘 于 2018-5-7 11:59 编辑 4 P# V8 d) a0 y* j) V
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          潇湘神 胜诀
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* t7 I  d6 E5 @. i          无所求，# I3 }. |+ V+ }1 C. P! F
          无所求，
" P& d9 t! c" P* ~- m* m          超然物欲去和留。$ O7 Q, O. c2 ^% `3 B1 k
          筹码起伏风浪里，
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          钱多得意张狂。
4 @5 s1 k7 w2 \          一波地震卷余粮，) U! m: x$ s+ o, z
          满目尽凄凉！9 K- ^6 I( n2 R( L

$ E9 ^7 W0 R' W7 X6 h6 H7 @1 H          寻遍卡中余数，
: U% b/ k+ W+ ]0 R' [# m          奈何早已空仓。
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       词是从我以前写的集子里面摘出来的，可以保证从来没有在任何地方发过；写菠菜的状态肯定是真情实感，时间跨度有点大；插图是在网上找的，为了帖子版面的需要。不为别的，尝试带点不一样的气氛出来，怎么样？
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, n4 h- x# v, j7 z; e7 E7 d       众鑫的客服佳琪近来写了几个“撩妹”系列的帖子，写的还不错，可她能写，我这个玩家好像这么写还是觉得不妥，只能写菠菜的吧？像钢之魂、君子有九思，帖子写的都是非常认真的，让人印象深刻。
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/ n! Q  c4 W* x7 |       论坛文笔好的人还有不少，可能是气氛的原因，好像都不怎么出手啊！所谓的文化氛围，靠的是大家，一个或几个人是无法完成的。再说了，菠菜之余写点东西，不也是种不错的深沉方式么？
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嗯 写的这个词还是不错的哦

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你的文化水平太高了，我是看的云里雾里

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hangaibing 发表于 2018-5-7 12:18
: C/ n) p7 U0 L; z: u4 G你这文采不去当个作家都有点屈才了

( ^0 E3 n/ d6 v# S作家可能没有菠菜来钱快吧{:4_198:}

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论坛什么时候成文人的天下了

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楼主还懂写诗呀，真的是有才华呀

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看文采写的也是非常不错的。

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什么叫做才华横溢？楼主就是。

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这些都是文化人玩的呀

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没想到你还蛮有诗意的了

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这写的还真是挺好的，一看就是文化人儿

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hangaibing 发表于 2018-5-7 12:18$ Z( @& }# x* v# w# i: Z
你这文采不去当个作家都有点屈才了
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有道理，都是才富五车，才高八斗啊！

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写的是不错了 可惜你这个人才啊

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有才天策也是羡慕的呢 哈哈

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大神这诗要是自己写的这文采就没谁了哦

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这个文采来菠菜真的是有点浪费了哦。

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论坛高手是比较多的了

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